Why the prop 30 has to pass.
9.28.2012
Prop 30
Argument: California cannot afford to cut programs to
education.
Intended Audience: the general public
Purpose: to have people realize that it’s not about taxes, it’s
about taking care of our schools.
But our states Logos: the logic behind prop 30.
Claim(s): our school system is falling apart because we are
no longer investing in it and cuts are not going to help.
Main evidence. Notes and references of the proposed bill
As of now our state has a deficit. Our state is very much
like a business, and like one it is in a bit of financial difficulty. Since the
recession the state deficit has grown every year and our public serves have
suffered. There have been cuts not only to schools but emergency services as
well. Recently a bill has been presented that if it does pass then our state
school systems are temporarily saved from financial disaster.
Pathos: the emotions of the topic.
In our modern day society it is clearly evident that public education
does a great serves not only to the children and teens enrolled in k-12 and
college students but it helps our state. All ready many school programs have
been cut. Classes have shrunk and the educational experience a child once had
is now a broken system of what their experience should have been. Imagine a
child in a class of over 30 students already struggling; who only needs a bit
of extra help is ignored because teacher aids are gone. After school programs
are gone. We need to show the children of this state that we care about their
education. We have to show them that we want to help them. We want them to succeed
and be better prepared for college. We don’t want them to feel that they have
failed at school when in reality we have failed in educating them. How are the
children who are born poor supposed to know how to take advantage of a school
system when that system has no money to educate them. If we continue to cut
from the education of children we cannot expect students to be prepared for
high school let alone collage. For too long we have placed education on the
back burner and have seen the results of this. We have fallen behind as a world
leader in education, and we at least need to begin to take an interest of
funding our schools. As much as we wish
education is not free. The more we invest in our students the more we invest in
our economy, our culture, and our future. As painful as taxes are it will be
more painful to know that our state cannot afford to fund our schools.
Ethos: Ethical Appeals character
As a college student I’ve seen some of the effects of the
current budget cuts. At our community college there are fewer classes. More and
more students are turned away for classes because there over filled. This semester
I wanted to take more classes. I was ready to pay for them and needed to take
these classes to not only help complete the requirements to acquire my AA degree
as well as not having to have such large gaps between my classes. Only these
classes that I need so I can continue my academic carrea where only available
at night. I have no care and the busses stop running a little before 8. Unless
I found a safe place to sleep at Cabrillo’s campus there is no way that I can
attend these classes and many of my fellow students are in the same position as
I. We don’t have much money but we want to be educated so we can do something
more than work a minima wage job. We want to become productive members of
society but what can we achieve this when we have the financial challenges that
we face. If prop 30 does not pass Cabrillo will continue to cut classes and
fewer students will be able to take even general classes let alone ones to
needed to earn a degree.